improving blog comments

this is room 3 learning about improving blog post

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i like how you used smiles 


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hello larz,i like how you used bullet points,smiles.

I like your title how it is a dark blue and a light blue.

I also like how at every bullet point the sentence change.

I really liked your photo about the wave

vises volcanos

Vises Volcano

Did you know that a volcano on mars is 12 of are cross country
fields up and gisborne

to wellington wide that’s long.

It was sad because 2,9000 was found dead

and most of

them where like hard dust in a

volcano eruption.a volcano erupted it

caused the tangiwai disaster when the train was going to

auckland from wellington the tangiwai was one of

the worst disaster in new zealand because there was 285 passengers and 151 of them are dead because of the eruption and the laha.

Some of the volcanos open downwards

then when pressure

occurs it is all over we can’t stop it.it shots out

rock that are flaming hot and can destroy your

house. and if it go into the sea what most of

the rocks do they turn into pumas. there are

lots of it on the beach and there are lots of

volcanoes in new zealand.there was one

eruption the volcano was called tambora it killed 71,00

0 people in 1944.

The tangiwai eruption the

laha flowed to the bridge then the

bridge and the laha broke the bridge.

it can be 40 miles per hour or faster.

The biggest volcano in new zealand was in

1944 it was one of the biggest ones in the

world. The maori     god of volcanoes

known as ruaumoko god was angry and woke up.

The book was called volcano disasters.

http://www.sciencekids.co.nz/sciencefacts/earth/volcano.html

By nikau.

my awesome calendar art

  i have used water colors and icons,i piked humble because i am always humble  wherever i am.

Danger floods

term 2 week 10 book review

Eel dreaming

Author Ben brown

Illustrator Helen jaylor

Main character the Eel

When the Eel stayed in the swamp but the Eel did not want to stay

in the swamp so same how a pokiko came and helped the Eel try to

find a new home.one of the rivers where to dangerise.one was to shallow.then one of them

Where just good for the Eel and that's where it has been.

I give this story 😁

Age recommended 7-8

Review by nikau room 3

vision pepeha

what is matariki

What is matariki

matariki is one of the  awesome 7 stars in space there's some other stars in the group too. matariki is one of the best stars  out of all the seven in the group because it's the sayings of the word. and it's most likely the leader  of the seven in the group. and that's the night star matariki.

By Nikau.