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Friday, October 19, 2018

improving blog comments

this is room 3 learning about improving blog post

before 
i like how you used smiles 


after
hello larz,i like how you used bullet points,smiles.
I like your title how it is a dark blue and a light blue.
I also like how at every bullet point the sentence change.

I really liked your photo about the wave

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