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Wednesday, July 4, 2018

term 2 week 10 book review

Eel dreaming
Author Ben brown
Illustrator Helen jaylor
Main character the Eel
When the Eel stayed in the swamp but the Eel did not want to stay
in the swamp so same how a pokiko came and helped the Eel try to
find a new home.one of the rivers where to dangerise.one was to shallow.then one of them
Where just good for the Eel and that's where it has been.
I give this story 😁
Age recommended 7-8

Review by nikau room 3
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 4, 2018 at 2:14 PM

    I really like the way you made your writing make sense.

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    1. AnonymousJuly 4, 2018 at 2:40 PM

      thank you for the commenting to my story.

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